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Re: Changes: Chapter 1
hey i really liked this it was good, and something we all can relate back to. How many of us have been in this position? Way too many of us. ...
Feb 22, 2009 -
Re: A Hundred Suns: Etherite
This was good, i like the way you start it out reading a dictionary entry. I think this could really turn into a pretty amazing book. Keep up the good ...
Feb 15, 2009 -
Re: Bloodlust - Chapter One
I really liked it, kept me scrolling down. Everything flowed together , i felt like i was reading a book from the library. Keep up the good work.
Feb 15, 2009 -
Re: 1) The Quantum Hole: power they couldn't have imagined
Really good, but got a little confused with the people....
Feb 15, 2009
